Adding detail to the end of sentences

WALT- adding detail to the end of sentences

Akiki works at a sushi bar, where she gets ingredients to help them serve sushi.

Baleen whales eat plankton and krill, with their outstanding jaw.

The fields are muddy outside, because buckets of rain where pouring down from the heavens.

Adding detail to the middle of sentences

WALT- adding detail to the middle of sentences

All the year 5 and 6 children are so lucky, because they have their own netbook.

The fields at Pt England School, are muddy outside.

Akiki, who is a student at the university, works in a sushi bar.

My hungry tummy, has had no breakfast so it is rumbling.

Learning my time tables ,1 to 12 in maths, is important.

Adding detail to the beginning of sentences

WALT- adding detail at the beginning of sentences.

Oloti who woke up late, and had no breakfast felt his tummy  rumble.

Miss Garden, who is Sione’s math teacher said,”Learning your time tables is important”.

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Detail in sentences.

WALT add detail in the middle of sentences.

Mr Burt,who loves kids, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, for all the kids who comes,  on Friday.

Lots of people, from all around the world comes to visit, Auckland city in New Zealand.

Xtramath

Hi my name is Sean and i am to division on my xtramath.

My Tangram

Tangrams are what you call using seven shapes. In those seven shapes there are five triangles,one square and one parallelogram. Andy you have to make something with those seven shapes.

I found it hard using seven shapes just to make a house. Some were easy and some were really frustrating for me. But at the end it was easy and i managed to make half of the page.