Free blog writing

On The weekend I went to the night market in pakaranga. It was really cool because my favorite food was their that was Chereos i like it because it has chocolate and caramel on top and it also has ising sugar.But my favorite thing to eat was a deep fried moro bar .


I like going to the night market because my mum spoilts me and gets me very thing. Sometimes she just gives me $20 and I buy heaps of stuff with that.But I mostly like sushi to  it makes me want to eat the teriacky chicken straight away.

But nothing for me beats KFC I most likely will have the krusher my mum loves it to I think.I love the chicken they make it is really NICE and when ever my mum buys the chip she also say "extra seasoning please". The best bit is when its nice and crispy.

2013 REFLECTION

How has having a net book connected to the internet helped my learning this year?

You will need to think about:

• What special thing have you learnt from your teacher this year?
• What significant thing have you learnt all by yourself - maybe online
• What have you learnt from your friend this year
• What have you learnt from someone outside of your classroom this year (ie not teacher or classmate)
• How have you helped other kids learn this year
• How have you grown your key competencies through using digital tools this year

Once you have finished: Have it checked by a friend or Mr S. Then post it on your blog with the title 2013 REFLECTION.

Plan:

Title:

2013 REFLECTION

Start Writing Here

Every day its casual for me just coming in the morning and grabbing my net book or chromebook. I remember when I was in room 12 it was just pencils and book,but now we have all sorts of things like,Imacs, net books and ipads. I also like doing a little bit of writing because it will help me in life if i chose a job like building which includes a little bit of writing.

I reckon I have grown heaps using a net book Because I know the key stuff to a net book and I also know the tricks. It  is really cool using a net book because when you get older you can probably be a technician person like a guy that comes to our school named Leon.When ever we have a problem he can fix it I just wonder if miss Telea just goes to leon and say like she is bossy fix that and its done in like 1 minute.

The special thing that my teacher taught me was different strategies in maths and the quickest ways to solve problems. He also taught me most of the key things like ways that are quicker than the way I used to do.My teacher Mrs Marks has helped me through the whole year and he teaches me all sorts of things.

Grass To Glass

Hi this is my movie project grass to glass. In my video it shows you how you make milk and get milk.
Hope you Enjoy.

Maui and Bothers

In a lonely island there was 1 brother out of 5 that was going to fish.His name was maui he was the one that caught the sun with his hook remember.Maui was up all night all day for a spot to fish until he said “this is the spot to fish” so he took a deep breath and grabbed his hook and through it deep through the see.It took so long to catch a fish he had time to read the herald suddenly maui prayed it was a prey to make it so magical and to rise when he catches it.

Then he saw this big fish he had trouble pulling it up but the prey made it even magical that some how maui pulled it up it was so weird because it turned green and also turned into the north island of new zealand.



Enstead of maui and brothers its sean and brothers.

Ambury Farm

On Tuesday i went with the year fives to Ambury farm me and my friend Collin were with room 14 because the year fives from room 18 got split up.At first me and my group went to see how cows got milked. I was the photographer for the and while the cows were getting milked we could feel them.

After that we went to go feed the goats it was very funny because when you put your hand out they like it with salibah. It was like a dog liking its food it just felt weird.But the one that everyone liked was the baby goat that was 1 year old.If you were wondering what a baby goat is called it is called a Buck or a Billy.

And at the end we could do free time as a group but we decided to have a  BIG  walk.

But at half way people that were feeling tired and lazy they could sit down and relax while everyone else is trying to keep fit and healthy.After that we went to go see some chickens it was very funny because all the girls were screaming while the chickens were eating all the boys were laughing their heads off.

My week presentation

Maui's Fish

Hi i am going to tell you how new zealand is made i am going to give you a hint new zealand this is about maui's fish.

Kawau island

On Tuesday the yr 6 kids are going to Kawau island in the north cove. Were they could kayak swim play sports and do whatever they want.I wreaking the best thing is jumping of the worth and doing huge bombs and swimming jumping all sorts of thing.

Athletics

On Friday we had our school athletics and i came 2nd and 3rd on two sports discus and softball throw.In sprints i could of came 1st 2nd and 3rd but I slipped i was angry because i could win but this mud puddle made me slip.But overall i knew i tried my best and my family was happy that i even tried.


Me and my friends Taimana, Stevenson and Collin were battling each other on sports the most successful person was everyone because we all tried. At the end of the end of the day every one had been good sportsmanship and we all had fun.

Maths DLO

My comment

Hi year 1

I like the way you guys were pushing yourself to add detail i like your crazy sea animal and how deadly it look.


KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

DLO

Writing test

Once upon a time there was a field filled with animals and there was also shelter for a farmer. There was something scary with this farm, it was like it was cursed and there was someone else on that farm instead of just a farmer.One night the farmer named Kevin was travelling towards his kitchen and he heard a whisper that said “ Give me some food or else …….”

Kevin felt harmed  but he had no fair he said to that whisper “who is there .” Suddenly the person who whispered came out of his hiding spot that was in the knife and fork area. Kevin got his baseball bat ready the person who whispered shouted “ no no i am sorry “ Kevin was slowly putting his bat down.

“get out of here” Kevin exclaimed. The person who whispered said “ i am sorry i was only doing this because i was homeless and i had nothing.” “ Well you do stink, have you even took a shower how old are you” “i am 29” “ and you haven't even took a shower for that long.” “ Of course i did  well no.” “ Well if you want to talk to me you need to have a shower use my shower and i will have some old clothes read for you.”

After that they started to talk and Kevin gave him a supper. Suddenly they finished talking about each other Kevin asked the unknown person a question “ why did you choose my house wasn't there other homes you could go too.” “ Yes but i chose a random house and this is the one i chose .”

Kevin got tired of him so he offered him some money so he could go and live at a flat and so he could change his life. I thought that was really nice of him to do.so the whisper went and kevin had a happy life with a wife and one child and they all lived happily ever after.

Show not tell when writing a paragraph

Birds tweeting above and the day gets shinier I pull myself out of my cozy warm blanket. After I make something for me to have morning tea and lunch.My feet scutter along my shelter that is keeping me warm. I try to get to my learning place on time and also help my lazy brother  out.

Festival Farmers

It was a very special festival day in lucban. it was called festival farmers. in the village people decorate their house to make pahiyas with leaves in a colored rice place. The farmers from the flock from all around the flock into the village for the day the band plays and everyone dances around the street.

Rosie retelling

Rosie’s dad bought a  mob of sheep this October shearing. A hunt away dog can gather a mob of sheep. The sheep need to sleep tonight for there shearing tomorrow, its 6 o'clock and Rosie's tired.

she need to feed the dogs and sheep then she needs to shave the sheep.  she is keeping the pen full of sheep. She needs to keep the wool and sheep clean.

Rosie had to keep the wool of the ground. Then there was more coming so that meant longer work for them. Now all hundred and fifteen hundred of sheep was finished.

Playing touch the day before labor day

On Sunday I went to loud  Elsmore to play touch wit my friends and cousins. In the first half the other team scored the first try and we were all chasing but we could not touch him but my friend Zane had a chance and just misted by and inch. But we were still awesome ion defense our team were spreading the ball out wide all the time but we still could not get a try because the other team was awesome on defense too.



Then it was half time. I Was thinking of what I should do next and  i came up with and idea, since people know that we always draw and pass i was going to dummy and then put o  a step and score a try.But I took a rest because I was getting tired so i took a rest.


Then i went on and as soon as i got on i was thinking about what i said before how i am going to dummy pass. So as i was on the right side i dummy-ed  then steeped and i scored the try. Then at the end of the game it was a draw it was 1 all by me.

Narritive writting

Once upon a time there was a girl named lilly she was terrified of the roller coaster at spookers, and was always sitting beside her dad or mum when she was on the roller coaster. Until she went to her friends house and they went spookers by themselves and lilly was thinking she will get embarrassed if she tells them she is scared of spookers. The most embbarrasing thing is that she is a tenneager and she still is scared.

It was getting more scarier for lilly because the sun was coming down, and after that things got messy. They went on the most scariest roller coaster that no one has been on before and that was lilly’s first time on that roller coaster. Suddenly they went on the roller coaster and it was so scary because you could see coffins mummys fake zombies and the most scariest thing was that they were all in one seat by themselves.

They were all screaming and it was there worse day ever and lily started to scream her head off. But after the roller coaster had stop they all thought it was quite fun and lilly’s fairs of been scared has blown away like  a miracle. So after that they all went for a feed at KFC and they lived happily ever after.

Immersion assembly

I'm A Farmer and I Grow It! from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
I weaken this is the best video of the term. It was really clever of Mr Marks and Mr Somerville to do this because it was all about teachers instead of children all the time. But it was funny when the teachers were dancing it looked like they were going to fall over.


But i like the videos of the farmers planting and harvesting all the crops. I t looks way easier because they are just driving a big truck but it could be boring. But i really loved the movie it was funny cool and awesome.
 

Free Blog Writing

Last night my dad recorded kiwi's against the cook islands for me it really should of been owned by the kiwi's. In the first half they scored three try's to nil. The tries were scored by Manu vatuvai, Nightingale, and Elijah tayler. Nightingale's try was set up by shawn johnson.

Manu vatuvai's try was set up by isacc luke he saw some open space for vatuvai and passed it out wide. Shawn johnson did a grabber and nightingale got the ball and dived.Shawn johnson successfully got the kick over. Thats all i have today look on my blog for the second half.