Tuesday, 11 December 2012

Paragraph for Michigan

Here is a paragraph about me that I wrote for Miss Harts grade 3 students in Michigan.

Hi my name is Sean and I live in Auckland New zealand. My favourite part about school is sports. I came first in high jump and 4th equal in Interzone. Interzone is a competition where all the schools around the community bring students who placed 1st 2nd or 3rd in there athletics day and now need to compete against the other schools. Recently my mum had a baby girl,who is the cutist baby in the whole wide world! Her name is Eden.  

Tuesday, 4 December 2012

Deadly Quest

In our room, we are practicing writing detailed sentences with "delicious" vocabulary.

Love is a powerful thing and King Polydectes was consumed with love for Danae. Daily she refused his offer for marriage. King Polydectes realised with Perseus out of the way, Danae would be forced to accept his proposal.

Perseus was sent on a deadly quest to go get the gorgon Medusa's head. If he succeeded, Perseus would get his beautiful mother back with him.

Cautiously, Perseus stepped into the ferocious gorgon's secret lair. He saw all the mighty warriors that suffered from the eyes of Medusa and had been turned to stone. Perseus found Medusa with the reflection from the shield that the gods gave him. Also with the sword the gods gave him, he fiercely severed her grotesque face that was covered with masses of hissing snakes.

Successfully, Perseus emerged from Medusa's secret lair. He shot above the menacing, stormy clouds with Medusa's head. King Polydectes had no idea how Perseus succeeded. Medusa's gaze still had the power to turn people to stone and when King Polydectes looked into her eyes, he instantly turned to stone from head to toe.

I hope you enjoy my blog as I post.