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Monday 4 November 2013

Writing test



Once upon a time there was a field filled with animals and there was also shelter for a farmer. There was something scary with this farm, it was like it was cursed and there was someone else on that farm instead of just a farmer.One night the farmer named Kevin was travelling towards his kitchen and he heard a whisper that said “ Give me some food or else …….”


Kevin felt harmed  but he had no fair he said to that whisper “who is there .” Suddenly the person who whispered came out of his hiding spot that was in the knife and fork area. Kevin got his baseball bat ready the person who whispered shouted “ no no i am sorry “ Kevin was slowly putting his bat down.



“get out of here” Kevin exclaimed. The person who whispered said “ i am sorry i was only doing this because i was homeless and i had nothing.” “ Well you do stink, have you even took a shower how old are you” “i am 29” “ and you haven't even took a shower for that long.” “ Of course i did  well no.” “ Well if you want to talk to me you need to have a shower use my shower and i will have some old clothes read for you.”



After that they started to talk and Kevin gave him a supper. Suddenly they finished talking about each other Kevin asked the unknown person a question “ why did you choose my house wasn't there other homes you could go too.” “ Yes but i chose a random house and this is the one i chose .”

Kevin got tired of him so he offered him some money so he could go and live at a flat and so he could change his life. I thought that was really nice of him to do.so the whisper went and kevin had a happy life with a wife and one child and they all lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Sean,

    I like reading your writing keep up the great work

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