Adding detail to the middle of sentences

WALT- adding detail to the middle of sentences

All the year 5 and 6 children are so lucky, because they have their own netbook.

The fields at Pt England School, are muddy outside.

Akiki, who is a student at the university, works in a sushi bar.

My hungry tummy, has had no breakfast so it is rumbling.

Learning my time tables ,1 to 12 in maths, is important.