My week presentation

Maui's Fish

Hi i am going to tell you how new zealand is made i am going to give you a hint new zealand this is about maui's fish.

Kawau island

On Tuesday the yr 6 kids are going to Kawau island in the north cove. Were they could kayak swim play sports and do whatever they want.I wreaking the best thing is jumping of the worth and doing huge bombs and swimming jumping all sorts of thing.

Athletics

On Friday we had our school athletics and i came 2nd and 3rd on two sports discus and softball throw.In sprints i could of came 1st 2nd and 3rd but I slipped i was angry because i could win but this mud puddle made me slip.But overall i knew i tried my best and my family was happy that i even tried.


Me and my friends Taimana, Stevenson and Collin were battling each other on sports the most successful person was everyone because we all tried. At the end of the end of the day every one had been good sportsmanship and we all had fun.

Maths DLO

My comment

Hi year 1

I like the way you guys were pushing yourself to add detail i like your crazy sea animal and how deadly it look.


KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

DLO

Writing test

Once upon a time there was a field filled with animals and there was also shelter for a farmer. There was something scary with this farm, it was like it was cursed and there was someone else on that farm instead of just a farmer.One night the farmer named Kevin was travelling towards his kitchen and he heard a whisper that said “ Give me some food or else …….”

Kevin felt harmed  but he had no fair he said to that whisper “who is there .” Suddenly the person who whispered came out of his hiding spot that was in the knife and fork area. Kevin got his baseball bat ready the person who whispered shouted “ no no i am sorry “ Kevin was slowly putting his bat down.

“get out of here” Kevin exclaimed. The person who whispered said “ i am sorry i was only doing this because i was homeless and i had nothing.” “ Well you do stink, have you even took a shower how old are you” “i am 29” “ and you haven't even took a shower for that long.” “ Of course i did  well no.” “ Well if you want to talk to me you need to have a shower use my shower and i will have some old clothes read for you.”

After that they started to talk and Kevin gave him a supper. Suddenly they finished talking about each other Kevin asked the unknown person a question “ why did you choose my house wasn't there other homes you could go too.” “ Yes but i chose a random house and this is the one i chose .”

Kevin got tired of him so he offered him some money so he could go and live at a flat and so he could change his life. I thought that was really nice of him to do.so the whisper went and kevin had a happy life with a wife and one child and they all lived happily ever after.

Show not tell when writing a paragraph

Birds tweeting above and the day gets shinier I pull myself out of my cozy warm blanket. After I make something for me to have morning tea and lunch.My feet scutter along my shelter that is keeping me warm. I try to get to my learning place on time and also help my lazy brother  out.