Tuesday, 29 October 2013

Narritive writting

Once upon a time there was a girl named lilly she was terrified of the roller coaster at spookers, and was always sitting beside her dad or mum when she was on the roller coaster. Until she went to her friends house and they went spookers by themselves and lilly was thinking she will get embarrassed if she tells them she is scared of spookers. The most embbarrasing thing is that she is a tenneager and she still is scared.

It was getting more scarier for lilly because the sun was coming down, and after that things got messy. They went on the most scariest roller coaster that no one has been on before and that was lilly’s first time on that roller coaster. Suddenly they went on the roller coaster and it was so scary because you could see coffins mummys fake zombies and the most scariest thing was that they were all in one seat by themselves.

They were all screaming and it was there worse day ever and lily started to scream her head off. But after the roller coaster had stop they all thought it was quite fun and lilly’s fairs of been scared has blown away like  a miracle. So after that they all went for a feed at KFC and they lived happily ever after.

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