Free blog writing

On The weekend I went to the night market in pakaranga. It was really cool because my favorite food was their that was Chereos i like it because it has chocolate and caramel on top and it also has ising sugar.But my favorite thing to eat was a deep fried moro bar .


I like going to the night market because my mum spoilts me and gets me very thing. Sometimes she just gives me $20 and I buy heaps of stuff with that.But I mostly like sushi to  it makes me want to eat the teriacky chicken straight away.

But nothing for me beats KFC I most likely will have the krusher my mum loves it to I think.I love the chicken they make it is really NICE and when ever my mum buys the chip she also say "extra seasoning please". The best bit is when its nice and crispy.

2013 REFLECTION

How has having a net book connected to the internet helped my learning this year?

You will need to think about:

• What special thing have you learnt from your teacher this year?
• What significant thing have you learnt all by yourself - maybe online
• What have you learnt from your friend this year
• What have you learnt from someone outside of your classroom this year (ie not teacher or classmate)
• How have you helped other kids learn this year
• How have you grown your key competencies through using digital tools this year

Once you have finished: Have it checked by a friend or Mr S. Then post it on your blog with the title 2013 REFLECTION.

Plan:

Title:

2013 REFLECTION

Start Writing Here

Every day its casual for me just coming in the morning and grabbing my net book or chromebook. I remember when I was in room 12 it was just pencils and book,but now we have all sorts of things like,Imacs, net books and ipads. I also like doing a little bit of writing because it will help me in life if i chose a job like building which includes a little bit of writing.

I reckon I have grown heaps using a net book Because I know the key stuff to a net book and I also know the tricks. It  is really cool using a net book because when you get older you can probably be a technician person like a guy that comes to our school named Leon.When ever we have a problem he can fix it I just wonder if miss Telea just goes to leon and say like she is bossy fix that and its done in like 1 minute.

The special thing that my teacher taught me was different strategies in maths and the quickest ways to solve problems. He also taught me most of the key things like ways that are quicker than the way I used to do.My teacher Mrs Marks has helped me through the whole year and he teaches me all sorts of things.

Grass To Glass

Hi this is my movie project grass to glass. In my video it shows you how you make milk and get milk.
Hope you Enjoy.

Maui and Bothers

In a lonely island there was 1 brother out of 5 that was going to fish.His name was maui he was the one that caught the sun with his hook remember.Maui was up all night all day for a spot to fish until he said “this is the spot to fish” so he took a deep breath and grabbed his hook and through it deep through the see.It took so long to catch a fish he had time to read the herald suddenly maui prayed it was a prey to make it so magical and to rise when he catches it.

Then he saw this big fish he had trouble pulling it up but the prey made it even magical that some how maui pulled it up it was so weird because it turned green and also turned into the north island of new zealand.



Enstead of maui and brothers its sean and brothers.

Ambury Farm

On Tuesday i went with the year fives to Ambury farm me and my friend Collin were with room 14 because the year fives from room 18 got split up.At first me and my group went to see how cows got milked. I was the photographer for the and while the cows were getting milked we could feel them.

After that we went to go feed the goats it was very funny because when you put your hand out they like it with salibah. It was like a dog liking its food it just felt weird.But the one that everyone liked was the baby goat that was 1 year old.If you were wondering what a baby goat is called it is called a Buck or a Billy.

And at the end we could do free time as a group but we decided to have a  BIG  walk.

But at half way people that were feeling tired and lazy they could sit down and relax while everyone else is trying to keep fit and healthy.After that we went to go see some chickens it was very funny because all the girls were screaming while the chickens were eating all the boys were laughing their heads off.

My week presentation

Maui's Fish

Hi i am going to tell you how new zealand is made i am going to give you a hint new zealand this is about maui's fish.

Kawau island

On Tuesday the yr 6 kids are going to Kawau island in the north cove. Were they could kayak swim play sports and do whatever they want.I wreaking the best thing is jumping of the worth and doing huge bombs and swimming jumping all sorts of thing.

Athletics

On Friday we had our school athletics and i came 2nd and 3rd on two sports discus and softball throw.In sprints i could of came 1st 2nd and 3rd but I slipped i was angry because i could win but this mud puddle made me slip.But overall i knew i tried my best and my family was happy that i even tried.


Me and my friends Taimana, Stevenson and Collin were battling each other on sports the most successful person was everyone because we all tried. At the end of the end of the day every one had been good sportsmanship and we all had fun.

Maths DLO

My comment

Hi year 1

I like the way you guys were pushing yourself to add detail i like your crazy sea animal and how deadly it look.


KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

DLO

Writing test

Once upon a time there was a field filled with animals and there was also shelter for a farmer. There was something scary with this farm, it was like it was cursed and there was someone else on that farm instead of just a farmer.One night the farmer named Kevin was travelling towards his kitchen and he heard a whisper that said “ Give me some food or else …….”

Kevin felt harmed  but he had no fair he said to that whisper “who is there .” Suddenly the person who whispered came out of his hiding spot that was in the knife and fork area. Kevin got his baseball bat ready the person who whispered shouted “ no no i am sorry “ Kevin was slowly putting his bat down.

“get out of here” Kevin exclaimed. The person who whispered said “ i am sorry i was only doing this because i was homeless and i had nothing.” “ Well you do stink, have you even took a shower how old are you” “i am 29” “ and you haven't even took a shower for that long.” “ Of course i did  well no.” “ Well if you want to talk to me you need to have a shower use my shower and i will have some old clothes read for you.”

After that they started to talk and Kevin gave him a supper. Suddenly they finished talking about each other Kevin asked the unknown person a question “ why did you choose my house wasn't there other homes you could go too.” “ Yes but i chose a random house and this is the one i chose .”

Kevin got tired of him so he offered him some money so he could go and live at a flat and so he could change his life. I thought that was really nice of him to do.so the whisper went and kevin had a happy life with a wife and one child and they all lived happily ever after.

Show not tell when writing a paragraph

Birds tweeting above and the day gets shinier I pull myself out of my cozy warm blanket. After I make something for me to have morning tea and lunch.My feet scutter along my shelter that is keeping me warm. I try to get to my learning place on time and also help my lazy brother  out.

Festival Farmers

It was a very special festival day in lucban. it was called festival farmers. in the village people decorate their house to make pahiyas with leaves in a colored rice place. The farmers from the flock from all around the flock into the village for the day the band plays and everyone dances around the street.

Rosie retelling

Rosie’s dad bought a  mob of sheep this October shearing. A hunt away dog can gather a mob of sheep. The sheep need to sleep tonight for there shearing tomorrow, its 6 o'clock and Rosie's tired.

she need to feed the dogs and sheep then she needs to shave the sheep.  she is keeping the pen full of sheep. She needs to keep the wool and sheep clean.

Rosie had to keep the wool of the ground. Then there was more coming so that meant longer work for them. Now all hundred and fifteen hundred of sheep was finished.

Playing touch the day before labor day

On Sunday I went to loud  Elsmore to play touch wit my friends and cousins. In the first half the other team scored the first try and we were all chasing but we could not touch him but my friend Zane had a chance and just misted by and inch. But we were still awesome ion defense our team were spreading the ball out wide all the time but we still could not get a try because the other team was awesome on defense too.



Then it was half time. I Was thinking of what I should do next and  i came up with and idea, since people know that we always draw and pass i was going to dummy and then put o  a step and score a try.But I took a rest because I was getting tired so i took a rest.


Then i went on and as soon as i got on i was thinking about what i said before how i am going to dummy pass. So as i was on the right side i dummy-ed  then steeped and i scored the try. Then at the end of the game it was a draw it was 1 all by me.

Narritive writting

Once upon a time there was a girl named lilly she was terrified of the roller coaster at spookers, and was always sitting beside her dad or mum when she was on the roller coaster. Until she went to her friends house and they went spookers by themselves and lilly was thinking she will get embarrassed if she tells them she is scared of spookers. The most embbarrasing thing is that she is a tenneager and she still is scared.

It was getting more scarier for lilly because the sun was coming down, and after that things got messy. They went on the most scariest roller coaster that no one has been on before and that was lilly’s first time on that roller coaster. Suddenly they went on the roller coaster and it was so scary because you could see coffins mummys fake zombies and the most scariest thing was that they were all in one seat by themselves.

They were all screaming and it was there worse day ever and lily started to scream her head off. But after the roller coaster had stop they all thought it was quite fun and lilly’s fairs of been scared has blown away like  a miracle. So after that they all went for a feed at KFC and they lived happily ever after.

Immersion assembly

I'm A Farmer and I Grow It! from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
I weaken this is the best video of the term. It was really clever of Mr Marks and Mr Somerville to do this because it was all about teachers instead of children all the time. But it was funny when the teachers were dancing it looked like they were going to fall over.


But i like the videos of the farmers planting and harvesting all the crops. I t looks way easier because they are just driving a big truck but it could be boring. But i really loved the movie it was funny cool and awesome.
 

Free Blog Writing

Last night my dad recorded kiwi's against the cook islands for me it really should of been owned by the kiwi's. In the first half they scored three try's to nil. The tries were scored by Manu vatuvai, Nightingale, and Elijah tayler. Nightingale's try was set up by shawn johnson.

Manu vatuvai's try was set up by isacc luke he saw some open space for vatuvai and passed it out wide. Shawn johnson did a grabber and nightingale got the ball and dived.Shawn johnson successfully got the kick over. Thats all i have today look on my blog for the second half.

Plants VS Humans

In a mysterious island there was plants. But there was something wrong with the plants, something no one has seen before, it was like someone has put on a curse. On that island one night mike ( farmer) saw a shadow in his house a very scary shadow

He got up and walked towards the shadow, Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! . As he got closer he said in a scared voice, “U-u-u-um is anyone t-t-there.” he exclaimed. Then a scary sound from behind said, “Yes."

Suddenly at 6am the shadow went away but there was no time to sleep because mike and his family were already supose to harvest. As the clocked ticked off it got hotter and hotter until lighting came striking down, mike looked up and saw the same shadow he saw last night.

Things got different, that night mike got up and he thought he heard a noise again. Outside there was his answer he saw a group of plants that was marching like they were in the army. And then the plants saw mike he was scared he has seen nothing like this.Then the plants striked at mike, mike has suffered and his life is taken by the plants.No one has seen mike again and the plants are never to be seen.

Free blog writing

On the weekend i went to my cousins house . As soon as I get there I played basketball with my cousin Eli, we where playing 1v1. I was schooling him until my uncle came he was turning it around he was schooling me.


Then I was versing my dad he was a a showoff though. He thought he was all that and he running to go for a dunk and he suddenly trips up. My cousin was cracking up and my dad was laughing even though he tripped up.


Then it was getting late we had to go have dinner I had the best dinner in the weekend becauseI had burger king. I had a rodeo burger combo with a large frosen coke and a ice cream Sunday It was really nice.It was the best dinner I had in the weekend, after that using all my energy I went to sleep. The end

Farming fish

This story farming fish, is in Togori in the Solomon Islands, the only time they could fish is when the water is calm and its a nice day. They don’t by that much food from shops they really only grow. collect, and catch.

They made a plan it was to make ponds so when there is bad weather they can still fish.

If you're thinking how long it took them to dig to make the ponds it took them one and a half years and 10 days to fill it up.3 years after the first fish was put in they were ready to eat it,adams job is too keep the pond tidy and don't let any leaves and stuff block it.They us larvae which is white ants to feed the fish.

But his best job is catching fish with a traditional bamboo. So his uncle  was success and he wasn't crazy. People can still go out for fishing in bad weather.

My sisters b-day

On Monday it was m sisters first birthday. She had cupcakes that Ash made (my older sis) an they were cookie monster cupcakes. When she eats its like a monster, and when she see's someone eating she will grab as fast as she can.


Her was a bike that can also be a walking thing, witch is like a plastic thing that you hold onto and walk. Her second present was a very big 2 meter bear it was taller  then my mum and dad but the b-day girl loved it. But at first she was scared, but after that she loved it. That's all i have today hope you enjoyed my writing.

Pairing good muster with a photo

Good muster is when you need people to come in like a group so you could feed them.Or for something you want them to do for you. I had trouble at first trying to pair up good muster because it just looked like a group. I thought it was about muster.

My fairy tale movie

Me and Colins interview in educreations

My reading interview

Reading in the morning

free blog writing

In the weekend on saturday , my friends taimana and stevenson came over to play and watch at eden park, st kentigern vs auckland boys. It was a really close game and the score was 11 to 13 because in the last minute the fly half did a penalty goal. Everyone knew the game is over and the st kents have won the title three years in a row.

It was and spectacular game and after that we went back to my house and played outside. We were playing rugby league  with my dad. But for him we only have to touch him because if we had to tackle him he will bump us off.

BUt then we were called in to have dinner witch was pizza and we ha pepsi with that as our drink. After we ate we played hide and seek in the dark and we all had to look for my dad. he was a good hider but eventually we found him after we did thay went home and my familly had peace and quit.  

Legend of Tāmaki Makaurau

Title:Legend of Tāmaki Makaurau

Author:John logan Campbell

Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses): Wairere, Hunua, Hui, Waitakere, Mataaho, Ruaumoko,

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail):In Auckland,  It was in some forest, There are animals, There were tribes and wars.

What was the problem? The Waitakere tribe and Hunua tribe kept stealing from each other and Hui was missing and then Wairere was missing.

What was the solution?Raumoku and mataaho  killed all of the Hunua tribe except Hui and  Wairere.

What was the Moral of the Story? To not acked foolish and ask before you get it.

My favourite part of the story was?  Learning about  Raumoku and Mataaho.

Illustrate your favourite scene in the story. (Tux Paint, Sumo)

The Hare and the Tortoise

Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses): Names: Speedy or Hare, Tortoise, Fox.

Personalities: Speedy is a bualie, thinks he’s all that, lost against an Tortoise thats older then 100, Tortoise is an hibernator, he’s lazy.Fox is a know it all, he’s kind.

Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail): The place where it is set is near a farm. It is where a tall mountain is and to get there you go past three fields. Has a lot of grass and a bit of rocks.

What was the problem? The problem is when Speedy bualie’s a old Tortoise  because he didn’t run a lot.

What was the solution? When the Tortoise beat Speedy in a race what fox setup.

What was the Moral of the Story? Never act like you're all that when you are not.

My favourite part of the story was? When they race up and down the hill.

Illustrate your favourite scene in the story. (Tux Paint, Sumo)

LOST!!

At the start in March, 2001 there was an attack that happened against me, my sister who wears diapers with dairy all the time and is sooo slooow, and some friends. It was some random people and they tied me separately to my sister called Francis. My body had scars and bullet marks. I didn’t know where my friends were but I knew that they weren’t safe.

I tried to get out but my body was stinging like bees was sting in the same spot. Then my younger sister who works for the Nava broke out and the prison guard snap her and  set the alarm off and the captain Martin came and shoot her with a M1911 in his spine and took him somewhere and that’s when I knew to kill Martin for killing my brother.

Then I finally broke out and act like I didn’t. Then I yelled out to the guard when he was by his self “over here”. He came and said “shut” then I got his face and smack it against the door and he was knocked out. I quickly grab the keys and free myself. Then I grab his knife and quietly stab the guard I knock out. I gra

Then I seek my way out and saw one friend of mine. It was a boy called Brock and Martin was there talking to him. Brock was on a chair tied up and the captain Martin was making him suicide and then he went and I thought to myself here is my chance to kill that guard and free Brock. Then I quietly killed that guard and threw his knife at the other guard. I disarmed the alarm and untied the rope. I told him to jump the fence while I hide the body’s. I threw the chair over and climbed the fence. I saw a car coming pass so I tried to hide but there was no where to hide. I ran off because people were trying to shoot me and I slide down this mountain and saw a bridge and water was down there. I jump in the water and this man save my life.

Then I grab a knife and thought he was one of them but he pull out his knife and stab me. I was stuffing and I wanted to kill him but I was to weak. Then I faded out and I die.

My weekend

In the weekend i versed ponsonby at victoria park, it was a really close game.

At the start taimana ( My friend ) kicked off.We were chasing the ball and suddenly ponsonby picks the ball up and runs he was going to get a run away but luckily he was brought down by my team mate. After that this forward ru up to me he thought he was all that but the i smashed him and he got sent off because he was winded. But then he came back on before that the game was still going, Ponsonby scores and they also get the kick over and that was the first try off the match.

Then it was half time while my team was talking to each other, Roland (my dad) was talking to me. He was talking to me about how i can do better and fix the bad things i did in the first half. Then the ref blows the whistle and we go back on the field and this time it is there kick of And then louis ( my freind) gets the ball and gets a run away try, and we also got the kick over.

It was going towards the end and then jackson scores a try from dummy half. And we also got the kick over, and then the other team strikes back. There was one more minute in the game then we knock the ball on and we lose our opportunity and they score and it was over and we lose but atleast we had fun.

The ugly duckling

Your Challenge: To modernise the fable, The ugly Duckling.

You will need to think about:

• Who your characters will be
• How you can make it more modern, e.g. use of modern technology, etc.
• Your use of speech
• Be creative!

Plan:

P1:Who is it

P2:Ugly wolf

P3:The Sound

P4:What Happened

P5:Where He Went

P6:Came Back

Title:  Wolf Life

Start Writing Here

On a early monday 2001 in New Zealand, there was a mother wolf. Her name was call Shrim and the father was named Bob. The mother wolf borned a wolf and they name him Jack. Jack was the youngest

Jack was grey and had green patches. He was really different to the others. Jack wish that he can be like the others. They had black patches and some were white. His brothers and sisters were mocking him and the mother want him out.

The sound Jack made was like a chicken. Bu burke bu burke to the others. Wolves were laughing and Bom and Shrim was a shame. Jack ran off and hid behind a tall tree covered with grass and sheep was there. He bit it but it ran off after that and Jack was hungry.

Then a neighbour whisper to Shrim “he’s ugly and hurts mine ear shaming for you’s. Ain't you gonna kick him out of your house or be a shame.” Shrim or the mum replied quite sad “yes I going to do it when Bob can look after his own self.” That late at night when only the dad was awake Jack had to be like a ninja and seek out. Then he went off.

Jack was cold and rain started to turn in gales.  Jack stomach was starving and then he found a place and had light. The door was left open so he went in and slept under the bed which was near the fire.  He was warm and when the sun was rising the next morning he was about to go out then a old man snap him. Jack quickly ran out and went off.

Jack was thrusting and hungry so he went around trying to find food as well as water. When he saw a pond he drank it and  one tenth was out of it. Then he saw a wolf running pass and saw a hunter so Jack seek like a ninja and followed the wolf. The wolf was his mother and he found his way back home.  

Using three strategy's to work out one question

TIME ZONE

Title:

Time zone

Start Writing Here:

While school holidays I went to time zone at bowling, me and my cusan Eli set each other a challenge, our goal was who could get the most tickets with 20 tokens. Going around looking for a game suddenly I see deal or no deal, so I go play after I played i was suprised because I won 75 tickets from then I was showing off to my cusan. So I went on to play another game it was basketball next thing I know my cusan was playing the same thing, after I played it I saw my score it 32.

After that I played a car game I was versing this 10 year old I beat him and I got 13 tickets from that. When I was playing he kept on crashing into me and I told him “ he is a bad driver”. While he was doing that I kept on driving after that he was still doing it, so i did it back it was so close who won but I just slightly beat him.

I had no tokens left so we went to m the ticket machine and we both add it all up. but it took awhile to get there because their were still five people in front of me. Suddenly I was there I add it all Up and my ticket said that I had won 253 tickets, but then he comes along and ruins it because he has a total of 327 on his ticket.

Harold question

1.             What is a friend?
Someone that respects you and doesn't back stab (not real stabbing but lies)you, and always is their for you.


2.            What makes a good friend?
You can always count on them, and they will never lie to you what ever you do.



3.             Why are they important?
They are important because when ever you feel down they always help you feel good, and they respect you and and they act like their your family.

The hare and the tortoise

One time ago their was a hare named rocko and a tortoise named kevin, Rocko was the best show off in the world, but Kevin was the polite one.

“I am the fastest animal here” said rocko, Kevin was the opposite to him he was one of the slowest but he could crawl very long. Kevin was one of the nicest animal on earth, he is really helpful when animals feel down.

While kevin was being helpful rocko was showing off and saying,” i am the fastest animal here i never, never lose except once when i got the silver metal but not any more”. Kevin was getting extremely annoyed so he ask the hare for a race “ if you lose you need to get out of here” said Kevin. “Hahahaha” rocko exclaimed “ you won't have a chance” said rocko.

So kevin and Rocko had a race “you need to go up the mountain and back” said the kangaroo, “ on your marks get set go”, ZOOM went rocko “Catch me if you can” said Rocko.  Rocko was zooming through the grass, he was already nearly up to the finish line.But suddenly he was getting tired so he fell asleep, while he was sleeping, Kevin ast him.

Suddenly Rocko woke up and he said” how long does it take for kevin to past me”.  Really kavin already past him, then rocko saw a trail he now knew that Kevin has past him. And he rushes to the finish line but kevin is already there so he packs his stuff and leaves the village With a loud voice someone says “stop” .

Rocko turns his back and he sees Kevin. Kevin asked him “would you “like to stay” Rocko says “ i thought you kicked me out” “ i was joking i was just teaching you not to show off” Kevin exclaimed. Rocko says “ i am sorry for that, next time i will not show off”. So they lived happily ever after.